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Evets
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Evets was a normal boy in a normal town, well, i did say he WAS!
You might this story is fiction, well thats where you wrong, sherlock.
I shall tell the story, the real one unlike that short one on roblox forums!

"Yahoo!" shouted Evets.
He had downloaded minecraft.
He started it up, he was very excited.
He went to create "New World" and spawned in a forest, for a few hours he mined with his pick, he had 40 iron ore and alot of wood too.
"Oooh a dungeon" exclaimed Evets.
He got his iron sword and killed the zombies, he put a torch on a spawner and took the armour.
The next day he was looking up servers on youtube when he came across one, the ip was just "MANGA".
He tried it, when he went to the game, the houses were all upside down and the track called "13" played.
A person called "Steve" was on the game.
"come" he said.
All of a sudden Evets was tp'ed to a wooden npc house that was upside down, but something was odd, the chests, furnaces, benchmarks and beds were on the ceiling.
He walked up to a window and was shocked to see the same skin as him walk up to the window at the exact same time.
Evets took out a pick, the doubleganger also took out a pick at the same time.
"What the frick?" muttered Evets aloud.
He put it back and walked back up.
"Who are u?" asked Evets.
"Who are u?" asked Steve at the exact same time.
"I am you" answered Steve.
Evets blood ran cold, he noticed at the exact same time that text appeared ,he hadn't even typed that.
All of a sudden Steve's skin changed, his face dissapeared.
The screen went purple and an evil cackle rang in Evets's head.
He felt his eyes burn, he looked in the mirror, his eyes were blood red.
Evets screamed, his computer shutdown, Evets's eyes stopped burning, they turned back to light blue, Evets was shaking all over.
The next few weeks Evets hadn't found out what the hell happened, he deleted that server and posted an offensive message to the user but instead he got a reply saying "YOU YOU YOU" in a big collumn.
Evets was dreaming of flying, flying across the night sky with a huge beast behind, he realised he was on a motorbike, he felt his face, it was cold as bone, infact, it was bone!
He grinned into the bike mirrors, he had the most horrifying smile a boy could have.
He threw back his head an uttered a blood boiling cackle.
"WAKE UP!" shouted his mother.
He opened his eyes.
"We are going to your cousins communion, get dressed and get your ass into the car! And put on something nice!" she shouted pulling off the covers and stepping out of the room.
Evets got on a tuxedo and a black tie, he put on a black bowler hat and ran downstairs into the hall.
They drove for a while.
"You look like a freak Evets" laughed his little brother, Dave.
Evets felt his eyes burn, he grabbed Dave by his collar.
"Say that again and i'll rip out your throat" growled Evets.
"EVETS!!" shouted his parents.
Evets's eyes stopped burning and he let go.
"Sorry" Evets said normaly.
They stopped outside the house, it was huge and made of red brick.
They went up to the front door, a rotweiler was barking at Evets.
After a few minutes Evets felt his eyes burn again.
He let out a blood curdling roar, the dog stopped, whimpered, pissed right there on the grass and ran off.
Evets's eyes went back to normal, his cousin high fived him and they walked in.
After a while they went outside, everyone Evets knew was there.
All of a sudden 2 tall boys stepped up to Evets.
"Hey migit" they said.
"Working for Santa Claws?" one of them asked.
They both laughed, Evets felt his eyes burn again.
"Say that to my fricking face" hissed Evets.
One of the boys knelt down, Evets grabbed him by the hair and shoved his face into the barbecue, the boy was screaming, everyone was looking at him.
Evets threw the boy into the fence, the boy was dead.
"Nighty Night" smiled Evets, he took some wood from the fence, put it into the barbecue and threw it into some wood.
Evets ran off, as the entire house burnt to the ground.


Evets sat at the house, he was watching the news.
"This just in, boy burns down house killing 20 people" said the newsman.
Evets uttered a terrifying cackle and wiped the ashes off his tie.
Evets ran into the kitchen, he pulled out the drawer, there was the biggest knife, the butchers knife, he grabbed it, and smiled.

That night he snuck into the other boy's bedroom, the one who escaped.
Evets swept up the stairs, he burst into the boy's bedroom and gasped.
A boy with long black hair already stood in the room, leaning over the boy.
'Oh boy, a double kill' thought Evets evily.
He ran with his knife towards them, all of a sudden in a flash the dark haired boy spun around and punched Evets in the face.
"You fight back? i like that" smiled Evets.
Evets knew this boy from the news, the boy had a white face, a carved in smile, no eyelids and no nose.
It was the famous murderer: Jeff the Killer"
Evets stabbed Jeff in the arm, Jeff kicked Evets in the stomach.
"Only one serial killer is famous around here, and thats ME!" shouted Jeff.
He threw the knife at the wall, narrowly missing Evets.
"Only one of us will fall" cackled Evets.
Jeff got his knife and scraped off all of Evets face.
Evets head loped to one side, and...he smiled!
"How the fu-" began Jeff.
Evets delivered a kick into Jeff's face, Jeff went flying into the cupboard, breaking it.
Evets went over to Jeff, he was still breathing.
Evets gasped, Jeff had a scar of a skull and crossbones on his arm.
"Jeff, look at this" whispered Evets.
"What?" asked Jeff, getting up.
Evets pulled up his sleeve, their marks were identical.
"Brother?" asked Jeff.
"Brother!" smiled Evets helping Jeff up.
"So i'll see you soon, sorry about your face" muttered Jeff holding a mirror to Evets.
"U kidding? u just made me cooler!" laughed Evets.
"Oh and one more thing before i go" said Evets.
Evets put the knife in his mouth and turned, he opened his mouth, to Jeff's amazement his teeth were now all jagged and bloody.
Evets smiled.
"What do you think?" asked Evets.
Jeff laughed.
"That looks just like my dog! You know, smiledog?" asked Jeff.
"Yeah i heard of him" answered Evets.
Evets went back downstairs, he smiled when he saw a huge red motorbike in the garage.
Evets drove it out, scaring several cats and wheeling it into a postbox.
"Woohoo!" shouted Evets as he felt the cold wind against his face.
He saw a car coming, he got of his bike and pointed his knife towards the car, waiting for the pain.







Evets expected to wake up to a "beep....beep" but he didnt, he opened his eyes, a huge cut was in the car, the driver was shocked.
Evets broke the window and grabbed the man.
"WHAT THE HELL WHERE U THINKING?!!" screamed Evets.
The man was speechless.
"I smell whisky" Evets claimed, sniffing.
He punched the man and got back on his bike, riding off into the moonlight.



To Be Continued?

糞 wrote:op was evets
plot twist of the year

糞 wrote:op was evets
plot twist of the year